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AI Cannot Give You the One Thing Only You Have

This entry is part 11 of 18 in the series AI on Your Book and Business
TL;DR: Ask a model for an illustrative example and it produces a plausible composite: a reasonable-sounding client with a reasonable-sounding problem. Readers detect those immediately, because real stories carry details nobody would invent. The model was not in the room and nobody wrote down what happened.

Ask a model for an example to illustrate a point and it’ll give you one. A mid-sized company, a plausible problem, a sensible resolution.

It reads fine. It’s also a composite of every case study ever written, and a reader who has read three business books recognizes the shape within two sentences.

The reason is simple and it doesn’t go away with better prompting. Nothing that happened to you is in the training data unless somebody wrote it down, and almost nothing that happened to you was written down.

What is missing from a generated example?

The detail nobody would have chosen.

Real stories carry things that don’t serve the argument. The chair was uncomfortable. It was a microwave. The brick was propping the door for smoke breaks specifically. None of those are the point, and their presence is what makes a reader believe the rest.

A generated example contains only load-bearing detail, because it was assembled to make a point. Everything in it is relevant, which in a real account never happens, and the uniform relevance is the tell.

This is why a composite feels thin even when the reader cannot say why. They’re missing the noise, and the noise is the evidence.

The book on this: Family Cybersecurity is 231 pages of things that happened to specific households, the part no model can supply.

Why does specificity matter this much in writing?

Why specificity is the only proof you were thereSpecificity is the only thing a reader can use to judge whether an author has been there. Claims are cheap and every book in the category makes similar ones, so what separates them is whether the author can produce the particular: a number, a name, a specific afternoon. Those cannot be reasoned to, because either you were present or you were not. Anybody can say most home networks are poorly secured. What went into Family Cybersecurity was driving through a suburban neighbourhood with a laptop and finding 127 networks on default passwords and 43 with none, in about twenty minutes. The second version is not a better argument, it is the same argument with proof of presence attached.Why the particular carries the proofEither you were there or you were not. A number decides which.1The claim"Most home networks are poorly secured"Anybody can say this2It cannot be checkedEvery book in the categorymakes a similar one3The particular127 networks on default passwords43 with none. Twenty minutes.4Same argument, plus presenceWhich cannot be reasoned toby somebody who was not thereClaims are cheap. A number, a name, or a specific afternoon is not.
Why specificity is the only proof you were thereSpecificity is the only thing a reader can use to judge whether an author has been there. Claims are cheap and every book in the category makes similar ones, so what separates them is whether the author can produce the particular: a number, a name, a specific afternoon. Those cannot be reasoned to, because either you were present or you were not. Anybody can say most home networks are poorly secured. What went into Family Cybersecurity was driving through a suburban neighbourhood with a laptop and finding 127 networks on default passwords and 43 with none, in about twenty minutes. The second version is not a better argument, it is the same argument with proof of presence attached.Why the particular carries theproofEither you were there or you were not. A numberdecides which.1The claim"Most home networks are poorly secured"Anybody can say this2It cannot be checkedEvery book in the categorymakes a similar one3The particular127 networks on default passwords43 with none. Twenty minutes.4Same argument, plus presenceWhich cannot be reasoned toby somebody who was not thereClaims are cheap. A number, a name, or a specificafternoon is not.

Because it’s the only thing a reader can use to judge whether you’ve been there.

Claims are cheap and every book in the category makes similar ones. What separates them is whether the author can produce the particular. A number, a name, a specific afternoon. Those cannot be reasoned to. Either you were present or you weren’t.

I can tell you that most home networks are poorly secured. So can anybody. What I can also tell you, and what went into Family Cybersecurity, is that I drove through a suburban neighborhood with a laptop and found 127 networks on default passwords and 43 with none in about twenty minutes.

The second version isn’t a better argument. It’s the same argument with proof of presence attached.

The book on this: Behind the Wire couldn’t have been generated by anything, because it came out of a journal a man wrote after he got home.

Can you prompt your way around it?

Only by supplying the story yourself, at which point the model is formatting, not generating.

That’s a legitimate and useful thing to do. Give it the raw account, badly written, with the details in the wrong order, and ask it to tighten the structure. The result can be better than your draft.

What you cannot do is ask it to supply the account. Any story it produces will be a synthesis, and a synthesis presented as personal experience is a fabrication with your name on it, a considerably larger problem than a flat chapter.

The line is clean. Your story, its formatting: fine. Its story, your byline: never.

Are composite examples acceptable in business books?

They have a place, and it’s to be declared.

Plenty of legitimate books use composites for confidentiality. A consultant who cannot name a client builds an illustrative case from several, says so, and the reader adjusts their expectations accordingly.

What fails is an undeclared composite presented with the texture of a real event. The reader assumes it happened, then finds out it didn’t, and every other claim in the book becomes suspect.

If you cannot use the real case, say the case is constructed. The cost of admitting it’s small and the cost of being caught is the whole book.

The book on this: The Ghostwriting Advantage describes the interview process that gets these stories out, a conversation, not a prompt.

How do you get your own stories out?

By being asked. That’s why interviews work and blank pages don’t.

Memory doesn’t work by retrieval on demand. A question about a subject produces the general version. A question about a specific occasion produces the details, and a follow-up question produces the ones you’d forgotten you knew.

That’s a conversational process and a model cannot start it, because it doesn’t know what to ask you about. It’s no idea that something happened at a housewarming party in 2011, so it cannot ask about the ice.

The practical version for somebody writing alone: record yourself telling the story to a person. Not writing it, telling it. The details that arrive when somebody is listening aren’t the ones that arrive at a keyboard.

What should the tool be doing instead?

Working on the material after you’ve supplied it.

Tightening a rambling account. Suggesting where in a chapter a story would land best. Finding the three places you told the same anecdote in slightly different words. Producing a first structural pass so you can see the shape and rearrange it.

All of that is real work and it saves real time. None of it requires the tool to have been anywhere.

The neighboring pieces cover the other gaps: AI never writes in your voice and the labor split that works on a book. The AI and Writing Hub has the rest, and my ghostwriting service is mostly six interview sessions and a lot of follow-up questions, for exactly this reason.

Frequently Asked Questions

Why do AI-generated examples feel fake?
Because everything in them is load-bearing. A generated example was assembled to make a point, so every detail serves the argument. Real accounts carry details that serve nothing, and that noise is what makes a reader believe the rest.
Can you prompt an AI into producing your personal stories?
No. You can supply the account yourself and have the model tighten the structure, which works well. Asking it to produce the account gives you a synthesis, and a synthesis presented as personal experience is a fabrication with your name on it.
Are composite examples acceptable in a business book?
Yes, when declared. Consultants who cannot name clients build illustrative cases from several and say so. What fails is an undeclared composite with the texture of a real event, because being caught makes every other claim suspect.
How do you get your own stories out of your head?
By being asked. A question about a subject produces the general version, while a question about a specific occasion produces the details. Recording yourself telling a story to a person surfaces details that never arrive at a keyboard.
What should AI do on a book instead of generating stories?
Work on material you supplied. Tightening a rambling account, suggesting where in a chapter it lands best, finding the three places you told the same anecdote differently, and producing a structural first pass you can rearrange.

📝 Disclaimer

The views and opinions expressed in this blog post are solely those of Richard Lowe and are based on personal experience and research. This content is for informational purposes only and should not be construed as professional legal, financial, accounting, or business advice. Always consult with qualified professionals before making important business or legal decisions. Richard Lowe is not a lawyer, accountant, or licensed professional advisor, and this content does not establish any professional relationship.

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