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Dune Parts 1 & 2 Review

TL;DR: Dune Part One rates 9.5 on first watch and 4 on rewatch. Part Two rates 10 on first watch and 7 on rewatch. The drop is the score and the preaching, both of which get harder to sit through every time. From inside the book, these are the right criticisms. The short version: Villeneuve made two visually extraordinary films that get many of the big things right and a handful of things badly wrong.
Part 1, first watch
9.5 / 10
Part 1, rewatch
4 / 10
Part 2, first watch
10 / 10
Part 2, rewatch
7 / 10
Cinematography
10+++

I’ve read Dune dozens of times. That context matters for this review because it means I’m not evaluating Villeneuve’s films as films alone. I’m evaluating them as interpretations of a text I know at the level of structure, not just plot. Some of what I’m going to say will sound harsh to viewers who haven’t read the book. From inside the book, these are the right criticisms.

The short version: Villeneuve made two visually extraordinary films that get many of the big things right and a handful of things badly wrong. The cinematography is in a category by itself. The casting is excellent across the board. The world feels correct in ways that matter. But two specific creative decisions, what Villeneuve did to Chani and what he did to Alia, come close to undermining everything the films achieve. And the ending of Part 2 nearly finishes the job.

The ratings need two numbers each, because these films do something to me that almost nothing else does: they fall apart on the second viewing. Part One is a 9.5 the first time. It’s setup, as the book is setup, and the half point comes off for Hans Zimmer’s score, which I can’t stand. Watch it again and it’s a 4. I can’t sit through it.

Part Two is the better film. It’s a 10 on first watch: more action, more payoff, more of what the story is about. On a second viewing it’s a 7. The score wears through, the whole thing turns sing-songy and preachy, and the weight that felt earned the first time starts feeling like it’s being pressed down on me.

What Villeneuve Got Right

The world of Arrakis looks exactly as it should. The scale is correct: the desert is vast, the sandworms are terrifying, the spice operations feel industrial instead of theatrical. Production designer Patrice Vermette and cinematographer Greig Fraser built a visual language for each faction, the brutal geometry of Harkonnen design, the sand-adapted pragmatism of Fremen culture, the bureaucratic weight of Imperial presence, that communicates character and politics without a word of dialogue. This is world building through camera and production design instead of exposition, and it’s done at the highest level.

The casting is uniformly strong. Timothée Chalamet carries the weight of Paul’s internal conflict without tipping into either heroism or self-pity. Oscar Isaac’s Leto is brief but completely convincing as a man who knows the trap he’s walking into and walks anyway. Josh Brolin’s Gurney Halleck is exactly right. Rebecca Ferguson’s Jessica is the most complex performance in the films, navigating a character whose loyalty is always divided between her son, her Duke, and the Bene Gesserit sisterhood. Stellan Skarsgård as the Baron is one of the more convincing physical presences in recent genre cinema.

Villeneuve also made several changes from the book that improve the adaptation. Duke Leto’s death scene, giving him a small victory against the Baron before he dies, changes the emotional tone from futile tragedy to meaningful sacrifice. The book version, where the Baron escapes unharmed, is more honest about how power works but less satisfying dramatically, and Villeneuve made the right call for the screen. Liet-Kynes dying by summoning a sandworm instead of quietly expiring in the desert is a better death scene in every cinematic sense.

These are the changes you make when you understand both the source material and the medium you’re translating it to.

Faithful adaptation doesn’t mean transcription. It means understanding what the source material is doing and finding the equivalent that works in the new medium.

For Writers When adapting your own work or someone else’s, ask of each scene: what’s this doing, and what’s the best way to do that thing in this medium? The dinner party scene that Villeneuve cut served exposition and political texture in the novel. On screen, those functions could be distributed across intimate character conversations without losing anything essential. The question isn’t what to keep, it’s what function each element serves and whether there’s a better way to serve that function in the new form.

The Soundtrack Problem

Hans Zimmer’s score is widely praised and I’m in the minority on this. I hated it.

Dune is a story about empire, prophecy, and civilizational stakes. The soundtrack treats every scene as though it’s happening inside someone’s skull during a fever dream. The choral processing, the percussion that sounds like it’s being recorded in a cave, the deliberate rejection of anything resembling a melodic line: it creates atmosphere at the cost of clarity. There are moments where the score competes with the dialogue and wins, the wrong outcome.

This connects to the film’s broader whispering problem. Dune whispers. Not just in Villeneuve’s version, Lynch did it, the Syfy version did it, every adaptation has done it, but Villeneuve takes it furthest. There are scenes where I rewound to catch what a character said. Dramatic intensity and audible dialogue aren’t mutually exclusive. Characters can speak at normal volume while facing civilizational stakes. The whispering is an aesthetic choice being made at the expense of comprehension.

For Writers Atmosphere and clarity aren’t opposites, but they pull against each other when one is prioritized carelessly. In prose this manifests as sentences so stylistically dense they obscure meaning, or pacing so deliberately slow it loses the reader before the payoff arrives. The goal is both: atmosphere that enhances meaning, not obscures it. When you find yourself choosing between the two, clarity wins. A reader who doesn’t understand what happened can’t feel the weight of it.

The Timeline Problem

The book’s two-year time jump is one of Herbert’s most important structural decisions. Paul and Jessica don’t become Fremen in weeks. They spend years learning, fighting, training, and earning their place. By the time Paul rides his first sandworm, years of accumulated capability make the achievement believable. By the time he challenges for leadership, the Fremen accept him because he’s become one of them over time.

Villeneuve compresses this into what feels like weeks. Paul goes from outsider to sandworm rider to war leader in a continuous timeline with no significant gap. The film maintains momentum and avoids the narrative interruption a time jump creates, but it breaks the internal logic of the transformation it’s depicting. The audience is asked to believe that Paul’s development, physically, culturally, spiritually, happened at an impossible pace. For a viewer who hasn’t read the book, it might pass. For anyone who knows the source material, it’s a recurring distraction.

The compression also eliminates Alia. Because there’s no time jump, Jessica can’t give birth. That means Alia exists only as a fetus communicating through her mother’s womb. This is where one bad decision cascades into another.

For Writers Some story elements have minimum time requirements built into their logic. Certain transformations, addiction, trust, skill development, cultural integration, can’t be compressed without falsifying the psychology. Before you cut a time jump or montage in your own work, ask what that time is doing. If it’s covering a transformation that’s a real minimum duration, cutting it doesn’t make the story faster. It makes the transformation unbelievable. The compression costs more than the runtime saves.

What They Did to Chani

In Herbert’s novel, Chani is Paul’s equal and his partner. She supports his prophetic role not from blind faith but from her own assessment of who he’s and what he’s capable of. She’s fierce, capable, and fully embedded in Fremen culture. Her belief in Paul is active instead of passive, she chooses him because she understands what’s at stake, not because the Bene Gesserit conditioned her to.

Villeneuve’s Chani is defined by skepticism. Zendaya’s version spends both films as the voice of doubt about Paul’s messianic role, pushing back against the prophecy, pulling away as Paul embraces his destiny. The intent is understandable: Villeneuve wants a character who represents the rational position in a story about manufactured religion and its dangers. Chani becomes the audience surrogate for skepticism.

The problem is execution. A character whose primary function is to resist the story’s momentum for two films becomes reactive instead of active. Chani in the novel does things. Chani in the films mostly responds to what Paul does, and usually negatively. The result is a character who reads as petulant instead of principled, because her resistance is constant without evolving.

She ends Part 2 riding off into the desert alone, rejecting Paul’s choice, a dramatically clean ending that contradicts everything the character is in the source material and sets up a Part 3 that will have to rebuild a relationship the films just dismantled.

The Deviation That Almost Breaks It Reducing Chani from an active partner to a reactive skeptic doesn’t strengthen the film’s thematic argument about manufactured prophecy. It weakens Chani. Those aren’t the same thing.
For Writers When you want a character to represent a thematic position, skepticism, idealism, pragmatism, the character still has to want something independently of that position. A character who exists primarily to argue against what other characters are doing is a function, not a person. Give your thematic voice a goal of their own that’s nothing to do with their thematic role. Let them want something, pursue it, succeed or fail on those terms. The thematic function will carry more weight when it’s attached to a character the audience believes in as an individual.

The Alia Problem, The Worst Change

Removing Alia from Part 2 is the most damaging single decision in either film.

In the novel, Alia is born during the time jump after Jessica ingests the Water of Life while pregnant. The result is a child born with the full consciousness of a Reverend Mother: an ancient mind in a toddler’s body, capable of manipulation, violence, and political calculation that terrify even the Bene Gesserit who created the conditions for her existence. She’s what the breeding program produces when it works, and she’s unsettling.

Her role in the climax is key. She kills the Baron Harkonnen. Not Paul. Not a warrior. A toddler who’s the Baron’s own granddaughter, product of the genetic manipulation he thought he was exploiting, destroying him with a gom jabbar. It’s the novel’s most concentrated moment of thematic payoff: the great houses played with forces they didn’t understand and those forces killed them from inside their own bloodlines.

This is where the Alia problem becomes more damning than it first appears. Alia doesn’t require a time jump to exist, she exists as a conscious being before birth. In Herbert’s novel, Jessica undergoes the spice agony while pregnant, and the experience gives Alia full Bene Gesserit awareness in the womb. She’s already a Reverend Mother before she’s born. Villeneuve used this: fetal Alia communicates through Jessica in both films. The mechanism was there. He’d it on screen. He chose not to develop it into the character Herbert wrote.

That makes the omission a deliberate creative decision instead of a structural necessity. Villeneuve didn’t cut Alia because he couldn’t figure out how to include her. He cut her because he chose to. Which means Paul killing the Baron instead of Alia isn’t an unavoidable consequence of the timeline compression. It’s a choice to discard the novel’s most concentrated moment of thematic payoff in favor of a more conventional protagonist victory.

The challenge of portraying a hyper-intelligent toddler convincingly in live action is real. The Syfy version managed it. Villeneuve had the mechanism already in place and walked away from it anyway. The gap is self-inflicted.

Alia killing the Baron isn’t just a plot point. It’s the thesis of the entire novel made physical. Remove it and the story loses its spine.

For Writers When you’re adapting or revising, identify which elements carry the thematic payload. These are the things that can’t be changed or removed without changing what the story means. Everything else is negotiable. The Alia/Baron moment is load-bearing at the thematic level: it delivers the argument about the Bene Gesserit breeding program and the unintended consequences of treating people as instruments. Once you identify your load-bearing moments, build the rest of the adaptation around preserving them instead of around the logistical convenience of removing them.

The Ending That Damaged Part 2

The final sequence of Part 2 has Fremen boarding spaceships to begin an immediate galactic conquest. This is wrong in multiple ways at once.

Desert people who have spent their lives fighting for water and survival don’t spontaneously acquire the ability to pilot and maintain spacecraft. The logistics of interstellar war, navigation, supply chains, communication across light-years, aren’t skills that transfer from sandworm riding. The Fremen in Herbert’s novel do eventually conquer the empire, but over years, with infrastructure built through the Spacing Guild. That controlled all interstellar travel and had to be negotiated with instead of simply bypassed.

The mechanism of how that conquest happens is the point of Dune Messiah and the books that follow.

Villeneuve’s ending skips the mechanism and shows the result, immediately, in the final minutes. It converts what Herbert wrote as a warning, the Jihad Paul unleashes is the horror, not the triumph, into something that looks like a victory montage. The Fremen sailing into the stars on spaceships they presumably found somewhere isn’t a culmination. It’s a shortcut that misreads what the story is saying.

A viewer who hasn’t read the book might find it stirring. A viewer who has spent time with Herbert’s vision of what Paul’s victory costs knows they just watched the ending get away from the filmmaker entirely.

For Writers Endings that skip mechanism in favor of image are a specific and common failure. The story earns its ending through the how, not the what. Readers will accept almost any outcome if the path to it is believable and specific. They’ll reject almost any outcome if it arrives without the mechanism that makes it earned. Before you write your ending, write the mechanism. How exactly does this happen? Who does what, in what order, with what resources, at what cost? If you can’t answer those questions, you don’t have an ending yet. You have an image of an ending.

The Cinematography That Stands Apart

Greig Fraser’s work in both films deserves separate acknowledgment because it works at a level that transcends the craft failures elsewhere. The sandworm sequences are among the most visually convincing creature effects in the history of the genre. The Harkonnen sequences, shot in monochrome for Geidi Prime, all brutal angles and negative space, create an aesthetic for that culture that communicates everything about them before a single character opens their mouth. The desert photography gives Arrakis real scale, which almost no prior adaptation achieved.

Cinematography this good can carry films that don’t fully deserve it. Part of why the Chani and Alia problems don’t sink the movies entirely is that Villeneuve’s visual storytelling is doing so much compensatory work. You can be frustrated by a story choice and yet arrested by the image surrounding it. The films earn their theatrical experience even when they don’t earn their narrative decisions.

Against the Lynch Version

David Lynch’s 1984 adaptation is the worst of the three major versions and it’s not close. Lynch imposed his own visual and psychological obsessions on material that didn’t need them and couldn’t support them. The weirding modules replacing the Voice is the most famous error but not the only one. The internal monologue delivered as voiceover throughout communicates character psychology in the most on-the-nose way imaginable, and Lynch’s aesthetic sensibility, which serves him brilliantly in his original work, fights Herbert’s material instead of illuminating it.

The Syfy Channel’s three-part miniseries is slow and cheap but it’s the most faithful adaptation. It keeps the timeline, keeps Alia, keeps Thufir Hawat’s capture, keeps the political machinery that explains why everything is happening. The production values are what they are. The storytelling choices are almost uniformly correct. For anyone who wants to see the book on screen instead of a filmmaker’s interpretation of it, the Syfy version is the answer.

Villeneuve’s films sit between them. Better than Lynch on almost every dimension. Less faithful than Syfy. More visually impressive than both combined.

Is Dune Parts 1 & 2 worth watching?

Part One is a 9.5 the first time through and a 4 on any viewing after that. Part Two is a 10 first and a 7 after. The cinematography is in a class by itself and would rate higher than anything else in either film. The casting is excellent. The world building is largely correct. Several specific changes from the book improve the adaptation.

But the Chani transformation reduces a strong character to a reactive one. The Alia omission removes the thematic spine of the novel’s climax and forces a lesser substitution in its place. The timeline compression undermines the believability of Paul’s transformation. The ending of Part 2 mistakes image for mechanism and leaves the story in a place Herbert never intended it to reach this quickly.

These aren’t quibbles. They’re structural decisions that change what the story means. A viewer who hasn’t read the book won’t feel all of them. A viewer who has will spend both films watching the films negotiate around the holes where the best parts of the novel used to be.

Still worth seeing. The cinematography alone justifies the theater. Just know what you’re getting.

For a deeper breakdown of every significant change Villeneuve made from Herbert’s novel and whether each one works, see the full analysis at The Writing King.

Frequently Asked Questions

How does Villeneuve’s version compare to Lynch’s?
Villeneuve’s is better on almost every dimension: visual fidelity, performance quality, pacing, and the faithfulness of the world building. Lynch imposed his own aesthetic on material that fought it. The one thing Lynch got right that Villeneuve got wrong was Alia, Lynch included her as a real character and her role in the climax is intact. That’s a significant exception to an otherwise decisive comparison.
Which adaptation of Dune is most faithful to the book?
The Syfy Channel miniseries. It’s slow and the production values show their budget, but it keeps the timeline, includes Alia, preserves Thufir Hawat’s capture by the Harkonnens, and maintains the political machinery that explains why the story’s events happen. For viewers who want the book instead of an interpretation of it, the Syfy version is the answer the other adaptations aren’t.
What are the worst changes in Villeneuve’s adaptation?
Three in descending order of damage. First: removing Alia from Part 2 and giving Paul the Baron’s kill. That throws away the multi-generational irony that’s the novel’s thematic climax. Second: transforming Chani from an active partner into a reactive skeptic. That reduces a strong character to a function. Third: the ending of Part 2. That shows Fremen spontaneously commanding spacecraft for immediate galactic conquest, a logistical impossibility that misreads Herbert’s ending as triumph when it was meant as warning.
Is the whispering as bad as people say?
Yes. Every Dune adaptation has done this, Lynch, Syfy, Villeneuve, and it’s a consistent failure across all three. Dramatic intensity and audible dialogue aren’t mutually exclusive. There are scenes in both films where rewinding to catch the dialogue is necessary. The score compounds the problem in places by competing with speech instead of supporting it.
Is Dune Parts 1 & 2 worth seeing in theaters?
For the cinematography alone, yes. Greig Fraser’s work in both films is among the best in recent genre cinema and it’s built for a large screen. The sandworm sequences especially don’t translate the same way to home viewing. Whatever criticisms apply to the story decisions, the visual achievement is real and deserves the format it was designed for.

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About the Author
Richard Lowe, professional ghostwriter

Richard Lowe is a professional ghostwriter and author with 113+ books authored and 54+ ghostwritten. Before writing full time he spent 33 years in enterprise technology, including 20 years as Director of Computer Operations and Technical Services at Trader Joe's. He writes nonfiction, fiction and memoir, and works with executives and experts on books that build authority.

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