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Behind the Book: Buttercup

This entry is part 29 of 74 in the series Behind the Book
TL;DR: I spent almost twenty years unable to write about the years I was married to Claudia. Told head-on, as my own memoir, it came out as an unbearable catalog of illness and grief. The book only worked once I stopped telling it and let Buttercup, our cat, tell it instead. A cat can’t editorialize, can’t reach for abstraction, and doesn’t judge a marriage. She could tell the truth about those years precisely because she couldn’t comment on it. Claudia died on January 31, 2005. Buttercup died two weeks later, of grief.

Claudia died on January 31, 2005. Buttercup died two weeks later. The vet told me she died of grief, and I didn’t know cats could do that. I do now.

That’s the reason this book exists, and it’s also the reason it took me almost twenty years to write it. I knew for a long time that I wanted to write about those years, the twelve and a half years I was married to Claudia, the long illness, the small apartment we built around her body and her breathing. I started it more than once as a straight memoir. Every time, I stopped.

Why is Buttercup not a straight memoir?

Told head-on, from my own point of view, it came out as a catalog of hard things. The asthma. The daily Kenalog shots. The water her body held until she was over three hundred pounds and left wet footprints when she walked. The marriage that had real problems underneath all of it. Written that way it was true, and it was unbearable, and nobody would want to read it. I didn’t want to write it.

The book only worked once I stopped telling it and let Buttercup tell it. She was there for all of it, and she was the animal paying the most attention in every room we lived in.

Can a memoir be told from a pet’s point of view?

Somebody threw Buttercup into a river in a sack with her littermates when she was two weeks old. She washed up on a bank where a stranger happened to be walking, and he pulled her out. He gave her CPR. She bit him. Then she let him carry her to the shelter, where she climbed the wire of her cage and demanded I stop walking past her. She was right. I was the one. For the next fourteen years she watched everything.

That’s what made her the right narrator. Not a gimmick, and not a way to make the material cute. A cat doesn’t editorialize. She doesn’t know the medical words. She doesn’t stand outside the marriage and judge it. She reads the apartment through smell and warmth and the exact sound of Claudia’s breathing, and she knows something is wrong before I do, and she runs down the hallway when the breathing changes.

When you take away the human vocabulary for illness and grief, what’s left is the thing itself, happening in the rooms, witnessed by someone who has no reason to soften it or explain it. Buttercup could tell the truth about those years precisely because she couldn’t comment on it.

The book on this: Buttercup is the memoir of ten years in a small apartment, told by the cat who witnessed all of it.

It also let me write about Claudia the way she deserved. She was funny, sharply and specifically funny, with opinions about everything and no interest in keeping them to herself. She cooked food that took all afternoon. She named a snail Dexter and cried for days when he died, and neither of us thought that was excessive. Through Buttercup’s eyes she isn’t a patient. She’s the warm center of a small territory, the one who talks while she cooks, the person a cat organizes her whole day around.

The illness is in the book, all of it, but it isn’t what the book is about. The book is about a household, seen by the one member of it who never looked away.

How do you write from inside a body that has no words?

The hardest craft problem was staying honest to what a cat knows. The book opens with her near-death in the river, and I’d to write that from inside a two-week-old kitten who doesn’t yet have the word afraid. She’s the smell of fear flooding in through her mother, and her body responding before she understands anything. No metaphors she couldn’t reach. No feelings she couldn’t have. Every chapter had to pass that test.

If Buttercup couldn’t smell it, hear it, feel it in her paws, or want it, it didn’t go on the page.

That constraint freed the book instead of limiting it. A person narrating grief reaches for abstraction, because we have a lifetime of words for it. A cat has none. She’s the door Claudia is behind, and she sits outside it in the long afternoons and thinks at the wood.

She’s the morning Claudia died, when I couldn’t stop moving from room to room, and she followed me the whole time and didn’t try to make me stop, because she understood that keeping busy was all I had. She couldn’t say any of that. She could only do it, and let the reader feel what it meant. The restriction forced the emotion into action and detail.

How do pets grieve after losing an owner?

When Claudia was gone, Buttercup didn’t know what to do with herself. She’d spent ten years calibrated to one person, and when that person was gone she couldn’t recalibrate. I was keeping her alive with daily IVs by then, and she let me, because I needed her to still be there. Two weeks later she wasn’t.

The vet said her kidneys failed, and he also said that cats feel loss in their bodies, that the absence of someone central can do to a cat what it can’t easily do to most other animals.

They grieved each other. That’s the truest sentence I know about both of them, and it’s the sentence the whole book is built to earn. I couldn’t have written it as my own grief on the page. It would have collapsed into me, into my guilt, into everything I did and didn’t do across those years. Given to Buttercup, it becomes simpler and more honest. Two creatures who loved the same person, lost her, and couldn’t stay in a world she’d left.

I’ve written a lot of books. This is the one I couldn’t write for almost twenty years, and it only came out once I handed it to the cat on the windowsill. She saw everything and judged none of it. So I gave her the book. It’s hers and Claudia’s, not mine, though I’m in it.

Frequently Asked Questions

Can a memoir be told through a pet’s eyes?
Yes. It’s a memoir of the ten years I spent married to Claudia and living with our cats, told through the eyes of Buttercup, the cat who witnessed all of it. The events are real; the narrator is the animal who was paying the most attention.
Why would a writer narrate a grief memoir from an animal’s point of view?
Because a straight first-person memoir of those years came out as an unbearable catalog of illness and grief. A cat can’t editorialize or reach for abstraction, so telling it through Buttercup let the truth of those years come through without commentary weighing it down.
Are grief memoirs too sad to read?
It’s honest about illness, loss, and grief, and it doesn’t look away from any of it. But it’s also full of a real marriage, a funny and specific woman, ordinary evenings, and the constant attention of an animal who loved her. It’s a book about paying attention while you still can.
Who should read a memoir about losing a spouse?
For anyone who has loved an animal and lost one, and for anyone who has watched someone they love get further away and tried to hold the room at the right temperature anyway.
Can a cat die of grief?
The vet said her kidneys failed, and also that cats feel loss in their bodies in a way most animals don’t. Buttercup had spent ten years calibrated to Claudia, and two weeks after Claudia died, she was gone too. I believe they grieved each other.

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The views and opinions expressed in this blog post are solely those of Richard Lowe and are based on personal experience and research. This content is for informational purposes only and should not be construed as professional legal, financial, accounting, or business advice. Always consult with qualified professionals before making important business or legal decisions. Richard Lowe is not a lawyer, accountant, or licensed professional advisor, and this content does not establish any professional relationship.

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