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Fantasy Writers’ Phrase Book

Fantasy Writers’ Phrase Book

Essential Reference for All Authors of Fantasy Adventure and Medieval Historical Fiction

Published:February 25, 2016
ISBN:153020772X
Pages:188
ISBN:978-1530207725
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5/10. A categorized bank of fantasy-flavored words and phrases, a modest brainstorming tool for widening a writer’s palette or escaping stock phrasing. It rates low because its core approach, supplying ready-made phrases, works against the original, world-specific voice good fantasy requires, and it teaches no craft. A small tool with a built-in hazard.

Fantasy Writers’ Phrase Book by Jackson Dean Chase is a reference of a very particular kind. It’s a curated collection of words and phrases, meant to help writers create authentic-feeling fantasy dialogue and description, the archaic-flavored vocabulary, the genre-appropriate expressions, the period-sounding turns of phrase that signal a fantasy world. It’s part of a series of phrase-book references. Like its siblings, it’s best understood as a prompt list instead of a craft guide. Useful in a narrow way, and easy to misuse.

The need it addresses is real, if minor. Writers reaching for a medieval or high-fantasy register default to the same handful of stock archaisms. A wider menu of options can help.

What it actually is

The book is a categorized word and phrase bank, lists of evocative, genre-flavored language a fantasy writer can draw on for dialogue, description, insults, oaths, titles, and the texture of an invented or pseudo-historical world. Its honest use is as a brainstorming aid. A writer stuck for the right archaic-sounding phrase, or trying to avoid repeating the same dozen stock expressions, can browse for fresher options. As a tool to jog the imagination and widen a writer’s palette of genre-appropriate language, it’s a modest, real utility, much like a specialized thesaurus.

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The danger of the phrase-list approach

The trap is the same one every phrase book sets. Lists of ready-made expressions invite a writer to assemble dialogue and description from prefabricated parts, and that produces exactly the generic, interchangeable fantasy prose the book ostensibly helps avoid, language that sounds like fantasy in general instead of like this specific world and these specific characters.

Authentic fantasy voice comes from a writer’s own ear and from the internal logic of their world, not from a shared bank of phrases that every other reader of the same book is also drawing on. Used as a crutch, it homogenizes; used sparingly as a prompt, it can occasionally help. The discipline is the user’s, and the book cannot supply it.

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Phrase book versus thesaurus

It’s worth distinguishing this kind of book from the more defensible reference it resembles, because the difference explains the rating. A good writer’s thesaurus, including the emotion- and setting-focused ones, supplies raw material, single words, sensory possibilities, options the writer then shapes into their own sentences. A phrase book goes a step further and supplies the assembled phrase, the finished unit of expression. That leaves the writer less to do and correspondingly less room to make the language their own.

The closer a reference moves from raw ingredients toward finished product, the more it risks doing the writer’s actual work for them, and the more uniform the results across everyone who uses it. This phrase book sits near the finished-product end of that spectrum, and that’s why it’s more hazard than help for a writer trying to develop a distinctive voice. The tool isn’t neutral; its form encourages the kind of borrowing that flattens prose.

Is Fantasy Writers’ Phrase Book worth reading?

It’s a narrow, modestly useful brainstorming tool, a categorized bank of fantasy-flavored language that can help a writer widen their palette or break out of stock phrasing, sitting alongside the other phrase books as a minor reference. It earns a low place on the scale because its core approach, supplying ready-made phrases, works against the original, world-specific voice that good fantasy actually requires, and it offers nothing in the way of craft instruction.

For a writer who uses it lightly as a prompt it can occasionally spark something; for one who leans on it, it’ll flatten their prose toward generic fantasy. A small tool with a built-in hazard, fairly judged as minor.

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Frequently Asked Questions

What is a fantasy phrase book and how do writers use it?
I think of a fantasy phrase book as a categorized collection of words and phrases, archaic-flavored vocabulary, oaths, titles, and genre expressions meant to help a writer create authentic-feeling fantasy dialogue and description. It’s a phrase bank, not a craft guide, so it hands you finished expressions instead of teaching you how to build your own. I found it most honestly used as a brainstorming aid instead of a source of instruction.
How should you use a fantasy phrase list without hurting your prose?
I’d use it as a brainstorming aid, something to reach for when I’m stuck for the right archaic-sounding phrase or trying to avoid repeating the same dozen stock expressions. Browsing it for fresher options works much like using a specialized thesaurus to widen my palette of genre-appropriate language. The key for me is using it sparingly as a prompt instead of leaning on it as a crutch.
What is the risk of using pre-written fantasy phrases in your writing?
The risk I see is that assembling dialogue and description from prefabricated phrases produces generic, interchangeable fantasy prose, language that sounds like fantasy in general instead of like a specific world and specific characters. Authentic voice in my experience comes from a writer’s own ear and from the internal logic of their world, not from a shared bank of phrases that every other reader of the same book is also drawing on. Used as a crutch, this kind of list homogenizes prose across everyone who relies on it.
Does Fantasy Writers’ Phrase Book teach fantasy writing?
No. It offers no craft instruction, only a bank of phrases. Authentic fantasy voice comes from a writer’s own ear and the internal logic of their world, which a shared phrase list cannot provide.
Can a phrase book teach you how to write fantasy fiction?
No, and I don’t think it tries to. It offers no craft instruction, only a bank of ready-made phrases for a writer to draw on. In my view, authentic fantasy voice comes from a writer’s own ear and from the internal logic of their invented world, and no shared phrase list can supply that.

About the author

Jackson Dean Chase

Jackson Dean Chase

Jackson Dean Chase is a USA Today bestselling author, award-winning poet, ghostwriter, and writing-craft author whose Writers' Phrase Books and Ultimate Author's Guide series have become standard references for working genre novelists. His fiction has been called irresistible in Buzzfeed and diligently crafted in The Huffington Post. The Writers' Phrase Books series gives writers genre-specific descriptive language organized for fast…

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