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Romance, Emotion, and Erotica Writers’ Phrase Book

Romance, Emotion, and Erotica Writers’ Phrase Book

Essential Reference and Thesaurus for Authors of All Romantic Fiction, including Contemporary, ... Fiction and Suspense

Published:July 17, 2016
ISBN:1535127228
Pages:164
ISBN:978-1535127226
Language:English
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5/10. A broad combined phrase book covering romance, emotion, and erotica in one bank, modestly useful as a brainstorming palette for writers producing such content. It rates low for the phrase-book reasons, sharpened by genre: ready-made phrases work against the fresh writing these cliche-prone genres most need and toward the parody they’re mocked for, and it teaches no craft.

Romance, Emotion, and Erotica Writers’ Phrase Book by Jackson Dean Chase is the seventh volume in his self-published Writers’ Phrase Book series, a combined reference of words and phrases for writing romance, emotional content, and erotica, marketed with the usual promises of instantly better writing and a cure for writer’s block. It covers the same territory as the older romance phrase books while adding the emotional and erotic registers, in the same series as the author’s other phrase references.

Like all of them, it’s best judged as a prompt list instead of a craft guide, with a modest use and the form’s familiar hazard.

The genre need is real. Romance and erotica require conveying feeling and physical sensation vividly and often, and writers do fall into repeated phrasings. A wider menu has some value. The phrase-book approach carries its built-in risk regardless.

A broad combined reference

Scope is the main selling point over narrower phrase references. Combining romance, general emotion, and erotica gives a writer one categorized bank covering the spectrum from tender feeling to explicit physical encounter, a wide palette of expressions for the emotional and sensual content these genres demand. For a writer producing such content regularly and looking to vary their language or get unstuck on a particular description, the breadth gives more options to draw on.

As a brainstorming aid for the emotional and erotic register it’s handled matter-of-factly, like its companion erotica-focused references. It’s the same modest utility as any specialized word list.

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Building romantic and sexual tension that actually works: the emotional register this lists, in the wider craft of tension and intimacy.

The familiar hazard, and the genre risk

The trap is the phrase book’s perennial one, and it bites hardest exactly here, because romance and erotica are the genres most prone to cliché and unintentional comedy. Pulling ready-made phrases for emotion and physical encounter off a list produces the generic, interchangeable, often risible prose these genres are mocked for, and the more explicit the content, the more a borrowed, off-the-shelf phrase risks tipping into parody.

Affecting emotional and sensual writing comes from specific, fresh observation of these characters in this moment, not from a shared bank every other user is also drawing on. Used lightly as a prompt it can spark; used as a crutch it produces precisely the cliché it claims to cure.

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Finding your voice: why shared phrasing tips into parody: the case for original observation over a phrase bank, acute in romance and erotica.

What are the weaknesses of the Phrase Book?

The standard series caveats apply. The marketing-heavy presentation, with its promises of instant improvement and writer’s-block cures, oversells what a word list can do, and the series carries its known authorship-attribution quirks. It teaches no actual craft, pacing, emotional truth, the construction of a scene, supplying only vocabulary, so a writer needs the real skill from elsewhere. And its value, like every phrase book, depends entirely on disciplined use. The combined breadth is a genuine practical convenience over single-register references, but it doesn’t change the fundamental nature, or the fundamental risk, of the form.

Is Romance, Emotion, and Erotica Writers’ Phrase Book worth reading?

It’s a broad combined phrase book for romance, emotion, and erotica, modestly useful as a wide brainstorming palette for writers producing such content, with the convenience of covering several registers in one volume. It earns a low place for the reasons every phrase book does, sharpened by genre: its core approach of supplying ready-made phrases works against the fresh, specific writing these cliché-prone genres most need and toward the parody they’re mocked for, it oversells through marketing, and it teaches no craft.

For a writer who uses it lightly as a prompt it can occasionally help; for one who leans on it, it breeds exactly the cliché it promises to cure. A minor tool with a built-in hazard.

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Frequently Asked Questions

What does Jackson Dean Chase’s combined phrase book for romance, emotion, and erotica cover?
I found it to be Jackson Dean Chase’s seventh volume in his Writers’ Phrase Book series, combining words and phrases for romance, emotional content, and erotica in one bank. It covers the same territory as his earlier romance phrase books while adding the emotional and erotic registers. The result is a single categorized reference spanning from tender feeling to explicit physical encounter.
How can a phrase book help writers working on romance and erotica scenes?
I see it as useful mainly as a brainstorming aid instead of a craft guide. Writers producing romantic or erotic content regularly need to convey feeling and physical sensation often, and a wide menu of phrases can help someone vary their language or get unstuck on a particular description. Used this way, lightly and as a prompt, it can spark ideas and not replace the writer’s own observation.
What is the main risk of relying on phrase books for romance and erotica writing?
I think the risk is the familiar phrase-book trap, sharpened by genre. Romance and erotica are already the genres most prone to cliche and unintentional comedy, so pulling ready-made phrases off a list produces generic, interchangeable prose that tips into the parody these genres are mocked for. Affecting emotional and sensual writing comes from specific, fresh observation of characters in the moment, not from a shared bank every other writer is drawing on too. Used as a crutch instead of a prompt, the phrase book breeds exactly the cliche it claims to cure.
How does Jackson Dean Chase’s combined phrase book compare to Jean Kent’s earlier romance phrase book?
I found that Chase’s book covers similar romance territory to Kent’s older reference while adding emotional and erotic registers into one combined volume. Kent’s book focuses on romance alone, whereas Chase’s spans a wider spectrum from tender feeling to explicit encounter. Both share the same fundamental phrase-book approach, and both carry the same built-in hazard of encouraging borrowed and not fresh phrasing.
Does the Erotica Writers’ Phrase Book teach how to write these scenes?
No. It supplies vocabulary. The actual skill of pacing, emotional truth, building tension, and constructing an effective romantic or intimate scene lives elsewhere, so the book works at best as a supplement used with discipline.

About the author

Jackson Dean Chase

Jackson Dean Chase

Jackson Dean Chase is a USA Today bestselling author, award-winning poet, ghostwriter, and writing-craft author whose Writers' Phrase Books and Ultimate Author's Guide series have become standard references for working genre novelists. His fiction has been called irresistible in Buzzfeed and diligently crafted in The Huffington Post. The Writers' Phrase Books series gives writers genre-specific descriptive language organized for fast…

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