Fluff Words: Cut Them From Your Prose, Keep Them in Your Dialogue
Fluff words make a sentence longer without making it say more. Cut them from narration and business writing, and keep the ones that make dialogue sound like real people talking.
The right word does work no sentence rewrite can match. These posts cover expanding a writer’s vocabulary, the difference connotation makes, and choosing words that land precisely instead of approximately.
DialogueFluff words make a sentence longer without making it say more. Cut them from narration and business writing, and keep the ones that make dialogue sound like real people talking.
DystopiaOrwell spent his life dismantling the class and empire he was raised inside, took a pen name so his family would not be embarrassed by his poverty, and died at forty-six. His most useful legacy to writers is not the…
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JanuaryThesaurus Day is January 18. How to use a thesaurus to sharpen your writing instead of bloating it, and why the simple word usually beats the fancy one.
JanuaryNational Word Nerd Day is January 9. Why caring about words at the nerd level is the foundation of good writing, not a quirk. A celebration for word lovers.
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Book ReviewsMost dictionaries document a language that already exists; this one documents an invented one, and does it seriously, a linguist-built guide with real grammar, syntax, and vocabulary, far more rigorous than its Star Trek origin suggests. Solid for its craftsmanship…
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