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Jeremiah Johnson (1972) Review

Jeremiah Johnson (1972) Review

TL;DR: Jeremiah Johnson (1972) rates 8 out of 10 on the rewatch scale. A man goes into the mountains to be alone and the film spends two hours on the practical difficulty of that. Almost no dialogue, real winter, and a protagonist who acquires a family without ever deciding to.
Jeremiah Johnson (1972)
8/10

A veteran of the Mexican war buys supplies, walks into the Rockies, and attempts to live there. He does not know how. He cannot catch a fish, cannot shoot an elk, and freezes through his first weeks while the mountains take no notice.

The 8 is for a survival film with the patience to show incompetence before competence. The first act is a man failing at everything in sequence, and the film treats each failure as information instead of as comedy.

What holds it short of higher is the last third, where a revenge plot arrives and the picture becomes a series of ambushes. The subject stops being the mountain and starts being a body count.

Failure First

He tries to fish with his hands and gets nothing. He tries to shoot an elk and misses. He runs out of food, has no shelter, and the film spends a long time on a man who is not equal to the place he has chosen.

That opening is the whole reason the rest works. When he can eventually take game, build a cabin and read a track, the audience has watched him acquire each of those things and knows exactly what it cost.

Bear Claw is the mechanism and Will Geer plays him as somebody who finds the whole situation funny. An old trapper who has been up there for decades, who hunts grizzly with a knife, and who teaches by letting the younger man fail first.

The teaching sequences are the best material in the picture. They are practical, specific and unsentimental, and the film is genuinely interested in how you skin an animal and where you site a cabin.

The frozen man is the film’s first real lesson and it is delivered without a word of instruction. Johnson finds a body seated upright in the snow holding a rifle, with a note leaving the weapon to whoever finds it, and the scene tells him and the audience exactly what this place does to people who get it wrong.

For Writers

Show the protagonist failing at the skill before you show them possessing it, and every later use of that skill carries the failure inside it. Most survival stories begin with competence because it is faster, and they pay for the speed with a hero the reader cannot measure.

Procedure is characterization when the procedure is hard. What a person is willing to do to eat tells a reader more than any amount of interior monologue.

Give the teacher a temperament instead of a philosophy. Bear Claw is amused, not wise, and the amusement makes the instruction land as practical instead of as a lesson.

Almost Nobody Speaks

Redford has perhaps three hundred lines in a hundred and eight minutes, and long stretches contain no dialogue at all.

What replaces it is weather, work and distance. Sydney Pollack shot on location in Utah in genuine winter, and the cold in the film is real cold, which is visible in a way no set can reproduce.

The family he acquires cannot talk to him either. Caleb is a boy who has stopped speaking after watching his family killed. Swan is a Flathead woman given to him in a trade and neither speaks the other’s language.

That arrangement produces the film’s best stretch. Three people building a life together with no shared language, communicating through work, and the film lets the audience watch them become a household without a single scene declaring it. The cabin goes up across a season and the marriage happens somewhere inside the building of it without anybody in it naming a day for it.

Swan and the Marriage

He is given a wife by a Flathead chief as part of an exchange he does not fully understand and cannot refuse without insult. That is a genuinely uncomfortable premise and the film handles it better than it had any obligation to in 1972. Delle Bolton plays Swan as somebody with her own assessment of the situation, and the marriage becomes real through work instead of through romance.

There is no scene where they fall in love. There is a scene where she laughs at him, and a scene where he brings her something, and by the time the cabin is built the audience understands them as a unit.

The film is also honest that he did not choose it. He goes to the mountains to have nothing and acquires a wife, a son and a house within a year, and the acquisition is presented as something that happened to him.

What follows is the reason the last act exists. He is ordered to guide a cavalry party through a Crow burial ground, refuses, is pressed, and does it, and the consequence arrives at his cabin while he is away.

For Writers

A relationship built entirely through shared work, with no declaration, is far more convincing than one built through dialogue. The technique requires patience and a reason the characters cannot simply state their feelings. A language barrier is the cleanest available.

Let the protagonist acquire what he was avoiding. A man who went to be alone and ends up with a family has an arc that required no decision from him, which is closer to how most lives really go.

Place the violation in something the protagonist knew was wrong. He is told what the burial ground is, he says no, and he does it anyway, which means the catastrophe is not bad luck.

The Revenge Is the Weakest Part

Crow warriors kill his wife and the boy while he is guiding the cavalry. He kills the party responsible, and then the Crow send men to kill him one at a time, and he kills each of them.

The structure becomes repetitive by design and the design does not quite work. Each ambush is filmed as an isolated encounter, months apart, and the accumulation is meant to read as a legend forming.

What it loses is the mountain. The first hour is about a place and the last forty minutes are about a feud, and the film never recovers the register it had when a man was trying to catch a fish.

The one sequence that survives the shift is the burned cabin. He arrives back, finds what has happened, and the film gives him no scene of grief at all. He does something practical with the bodies and then goes hunting, and the absence of the scene an audience is braced for does considerably more damage than any amount of on-screen grieving could possibly have managed.

The legend material is the interesting residue. Other trappers begin telling stories about him, the stories get larger, and the film ends on him becoming a figure in somebody else’s account instead of a man in a landscape.

Milius wrote the first draft and the mythologizing instinct is his, and Pollack pulled a great deal of it back toward the practical. The tension between those two impulses is visible in the finished film, and the half that survives best is Pollack’s.

The Last Gesture

The final scene is Johnson and a Crow chief on a ridge at distance, and the chief raises a hand, and Johnson raises his, and the film freezes.

Nothing is explained. It may be a truce, an acknowledgment, or a salute between two men who have killed a great many of each other’s people and have arrived at some private understanding.

The film’s refusal to interpret it is the right call. Two men on a mountain who cannot speak to each other, making a gesture, is exactly the register the whole picture has been working in.

What the ending does not do is resolve the feud, restore the family or bring him down from the mountains. He is still up there, still alone, and the last image is a man who got precisely what he originally asked for.

That final ambiguity is also the honest answer to the material. The real accounts of the man this is drawn from are contradictory, largely unverifiable and mostly told by other people, and a film that ends on a gesture nobody explains is closer to the record than any resolution would be.

For Writers

An ending that refuses interpretation works when the whole story has been conducted without explanation. This one earns the ambiguity because nobody has been explaining anything for a hundred minutes. The failure mode is a work full of exposition that suddenly goes mysterious in the last page.

Grant the protagonist the thing he wanted and let the reader see what it costs. He asked to be alone and he is alone, and the film does not need to comment.

A gesture is stronger than a line when two characters have no shared language. Find the physical equivalent of what would otherwise be dialogue.

Should you watch Jeremiah Johnson?

Yes, for the first hour especially. A man who cannot catch a fish becoming somebody who can live in mountains, filmed in real winter with almost no dialogue, and a family he acquires without ever agreeing to it.

Frequently Asked Questions

What is Jeremiah Johnson about?
A veteran walks into the Rocky Mountains in the 1840s intending to live alone, fails at almost everything, is taught to survive by an old trapper, and acquires a family he never set out to have.
Is it based on a real person?
Loosely, on accounts of a mountain man called John Johnston and on two books, with a great deal of legend attached that the film is deliberately vague about.
Why is there so little dialogue?
Redford has perhaps three hundred lines in a hundred and eight minutes. The family he acquires cannot talk to him either, since the boy has stopped speaking and his wife speaks no English, so the household is built through work.
Was it shot in real winter?
Yes, on location in Utah, and the cold is visible in a way no set reproduces. Robert Redford knew the area well and the production used it heavily.
What is the weakest part?
The last third, when a revenge plot arrives and the film becomes a series of isolated ambushes. The first hour is about a place and the last forty minutes are about a feud.
What happens at the end?
Johnson and a Crow chief see each other across a distance and each raises a hand, and the film freezes. It is never explained, and the refusal to interpret it matches the register of the whole picture.
What can writers take from it?
Show a character failing at a skill before showing them possessing it, and build a relationship through shared work instead of declaration. A language barrier is the cleanest reason two people cannot simply state their feelings.

This film appears on one of my film lists

🏷︎ 1970s🏷︎ Family🏷︎ Revenge🏷︎ Survival Against the Odds