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Eragon

Eragon
Published:April 26, 2005
ISBN:0375826696
Pages:545
ISBN:9780375826696
Language:English
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6/10. Written when Paolini was fifteen, a hugely successful gateway fantasy that’s also openly derivative: a Star Wars plot over a Tolkien world with McCaffrey’s dragon-riders. Credit for teen-author ambition and real young-reader appeal, balanced against borrowed plotting and the prose limits of a young writer. A solid entry point to the genre, short of a classic.

A teenage farm boy finds a mysterious stone that hatches into a dragon, the evil empire’s servants murder his uncle, an old mentor reveals himself as a member of a fallen order and gives the boy a sword, and together they set off to topple a tyrant.

If that outline sounds deeply familiar, that’s the central fact about Eragon: Christopher Paolini’s debut is at once a phenomenon, beloved by a generation of young readers, and among the most openly derivative fantasy novels ever to become a bestseller. An honest review has to hold both truths at once. The context is part of the story. Paolini began writing Eragon at fifteen, fresh out of homeschooling, and that fact cuts both ways, as unusual achievement and as explanation for the book’s limitations.

The derivativeness, named plainly

There’s no honest way around it: the plot is Star Wars with a Lord of the Rings paint job. The farm boy of humble origins, the murdered guardian, the wise mentor from a destroyed order of knights, the hidden lineage, the evil emperor, the climactic confrontation, these are the beats of Luke Skywalker’s story transposed to a fantasy world. That world, in turn, is heavily Tolkien: elves, dwarves, and an orc analogue sharing a continent, with a magic system built on an ancient language.

Add the dragon-rider bond lifted from Anne McCaffrey’s Pern, and the influences aren’t subtle homage but near-tracing. Critics who called it pastiche instead of originality had a real point, and a writer reading it as craft study should see clearly how much is borrowed.

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Why young readers loved it anyway

And yet millions of young readers adored it, which an honest review must take seriously instead of dismiss. For a reader who hasn’t yet encountered the source material, the familiar archetypes aren’t stale but thrilling, the chosen-one quest and the dragon-rider bond work because they’re proven, resonant structures. The bond between Eragon and his dragon Saphira, conveyed largely through their mental connection, is engaging, and Paolini’s earnest, wholehearted commitment to his epic, free of irony or cynicism, is exactly what many young fantasy readers want.

As a gateway into the genre, the book has launched countless readers toward the fantasy that influenced it.

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The teen-author question

The fairest lens is also the most double-edged: Paolini wrote this at fifteen. That makes the accomplishment, a complete, publishable, eventually bestselling epic fantasy from a teenager, impressive, and it also explains the weaknesses. The derivative plotting, the sometimes overwrought and adjective-heavy prose, the thinner characterization, the pacing that sags, are the marks of a talented young writer still absorbing his influences instead of transcending them. Judged as the work of a teenager it’s unusual; judged against the adult fantasy masters it imitates it falls well short.

Both judgments are true, and the book sits between them.

Is Eragon worth reading?

It’s a competent, earnest, hugely successful gateway fantasy whose appeal to young readers is real and whose derivativeness is equally real. It rates in the middle: credit for the productivity and ambition of a teenage author, for the pull of the dragon-rider bond, and for its proven power to bring young readers into the genre, balanced against plotting lifted almost wholesale from Star Wars, a heavily borrowed Tolkien-style world, and the prose and character limitations of a very young writer.

For its target young-reader audience it works; for an adult steeped in fantasy it’ll read as familiar to the point of pastiche. A solid entry point, not a classic, and honest about being both.

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Frequently Asked Questions

What is Eragon about?
In my review, I describe Eragon as Christopher Paolini’s debut fantasy and the opening book of the Inheritance Cycle. I found it centers on a teenage farm boy who discovers a mysterious stone that hatches into a dragon named Saphira. His uncle is murdered by the evil empire’s servants, and an old mentor reveals himself as a member of a fallen order before giving the boy a sword. Together they set off to topple a tyrant, with the mental bond between the boy and his dragon driving much of the story.
Is Eragon really that derivative?
I found Eragon openly derivative, and there’s no honest way around it. The plot closely traces Star Wars: a farm boy of humble origins, a murdered guardian, a wise mentor from a destroyed order, a hidden lineage, and an evil emperor. That world is built on a heavily Tolkien foundation, with elves, dwarves, and an orc analogue sharing a continent. I also noticed the dragon-rider bond is lifted almost directly from Anne McCaffrey’s Pern novels. That makes the influences read less like homage and more like near-tracing.
Why was Eragon so popular if it’s derivative?
In my review I took seriously why millions of young readers loved Eragon despite its derivativeness. For a reader who hasn’t yet encountered Star Wars, Tolkien, or Pern, the familiar archetypes feel thrilling and not stale, because they’re proven, powerful structures. I found the bond between Eragon and Saphira, conveyed largely through their mental connection, engaging. Paolini’s earnest, wholehearted commitment to his epic, free of irony or cynicism, is exactly what many young fantasy readers want, and that combination is what launched countless readers into the genre.
Does it matter that Christopher Paolini wrote Eragon as a teenager?
I think it matters a great deal that Christopher Paolini wrote Eragon at fifteen, right out of homeschooling. That fact cuts both ways in my review: it makes the accomplishment of producing a complete, publishable, eventually bestselling epic fantasy impressive, and it also explains the book’s weaknesses. I saw the derivative plotting, the sometimes overwrought and adjective-heavy prose, the thinner characterization, and the sagging pacing as marks of a talented young writer still absorbing his influences instead of transcending them. Judged as the work of a teenager, I found it unusual; judged against the adult fantasy masters it imitates, it falls well short.
Who should read Eragon?
I’d recommend Eragon mainly to young readers and newcomers to fantasy, for whom it works as an exciting gateway into the genre. In my review I noted it launched countless readers toward the fantasy that influenced it, including Tolkien and McCaffrey. Adult readers steeped in the genre will likely find it familiar to the point of pastiche, since the plot borrows so heavily from Star Wars and Tolkien. I think it still has value for those readers as a craft study in how influences can become near-tracing instead of transformation.
What can a writer learn from Eragon?
Two lessons, one positive and one cautionary. Positively, that proven archetypes, the chosen one, the mentor, the bonded companion, work because they land. Cautionarily, that borrowing structure this closely reads as pastiche to informed readers, and the craft challenge is to transform influences instead of trace them.

About the author

Christopher Paolini

Christopher Paolini

Christopher Paolini, born in 1983, is an American author best known for the Inheritance Cycle, a young-adult epic fantasy series that began with Eragon. He was raised and home-schooled in Montana, and he began writing Eragon as a teenager after graduating from a home-study program at fifteen. His parents' small publishing company first released Eragon, and Paolini toured tirelessly to…

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