How do you write about Christmas in fiction and memoir?
Warmth, togetherness, twinkling lights, the smell of cookies: every reader has heard those Christmas descriptions a thousand times, and their eyes slide right past them. Those scenes fail because they describe Christmas in general instead of a specific Christmas that happened to specific people. For more, see how to capture your life in a memoir readers will love 💙.
What separates a Christmas scene that works from one that doesn’t is the same thing that separates good writing from bad everywhere else: specificity. The particular tree, the particular family, the particular tension or joy or exhaustion that made that Christmas different from every other one. I get impatient with Christmas writing that skips this, because the writer had something real and traded it for a greeting card, and the family who reads it years later finds nothing they recognize.
The craft principles are the same for writing Christmas into a novel, capturing holiday memories in a memoir, or building a holiday episode into a series. This is what I’ve learned from 113+ books, dozens of novels, and a lifetime of holidays worth remembering.
The Specificity Problem
Generic Christmas writing sounds like a greeting card. “The house was filled with the warm glow of the season.”
What house? What glow? Whose season? The reader’s brain receives the signal “Christmas scene” and supplies stock imagery from their own memory, and at that point you’ve handed your job to the reader. I think it’s the most common failure in holiday writing, and the easiest one to fix.
Specific Christmas writing puts the reader in a particular room.
The Scholastic Book Club order that arrived the week before Christmas and sat unopened on the kitchen counter because my mother insisted it was a gift, even though I could see the spines through the packaging and knew exactly which books were inside. That’s a Christmas detail. It’s mine. No one else has it. And because it’s specific, it’s vivid in a way that “gifts under the tree” never will be.
When you write about Christmas, start with the details that belong only to your story. The ornament that’s been on the tree since before you were born and nobody remembers who made it.
The dish that only gets cooked once a year and always comes out slightly different. The argument that happens every year about the same thing. The person who isn’t there anymore and how their absence changes the shape of the room.
How do sensory details anchor holiday writing?
Holiday scenes succeed or fail on sensory detail. Not the five senses listed out like a checklist, but the one or two sensory details that put the reader in the moment. The sound of someone tearing wrapping paper is different from the sound of someone carefully peeling it back. The first tells you something about the person opening the gift (excitement, impatience, youth). The second tells you something different (care, anxiety, the desire to save the paper). One sensory detail, two completely different characters.
Food is the most powerful sensory anchor for holiday writing because it connects to memory more directly than any other sense. Don’t just name the dish.
Describe the process of making it, the kitchen it happened in, the person whose hands did the work. A recipe in a memoir is a portrait of the person who cooked it, told through ingredients and technique.
If you’re including family recipes in a memoir, write them the way the person who made them would explain them: “a handful of this, cook it until it looks right, and don’t let your brother near the stove.” The imprecision is the personality. Tidy it into measured cups and oven temperatures and you’ve erased the cook from the recipe, and I’d argue with any editor who tried.
Christmas in Fiction
Holiday scenes in fiction serve a different purpose than holiday scenes in memoir. In fiction, Christmas is a pressure cooker. It forces characters into confined spaces with people they have complicated relationships with, under cultural expectations of happiness and harmony that make conflict feel worse.
The best fictional Christmas scenes use the holiday’s expectations against the characters. Everyone is supposed to be happy. Everyone is supposed to get along. The gap between what’s supposed to happen and what happens creates the drama.
In Through the Looking Glass, I wrote a Christmas scene set in a cam studio in Romania. The holiday amplifies everything: the loneliness of the clients, the commercial nature of the work, the strange community the workers have built, and the disconnect between the cultural meaning of Christmas and the reality of spending it performing for strangers on the internet. Christmas doesn’t create the conflict. It reveals what was already there by providing a frame of reference (what Christmas is “supposed to be”) that makes the reality sharper by contrast.
For a Christmas scene in fiction, ask what this holiday reveals about these characters that an ordinary Tuesday wouldn’t. If the answer is nothing, move the scene to a Tuesday. Christmas used as wallpaper wastes the one day of the year when your characters have the most to lose in front of each other, and readers notice.
Christmas in Memoir
Memoir handles Christmas differently because the events are real and the people are (or were) real. The challenge is selection. You have dozens of Christmases to choose from. Which ones belong in the book?
The answer is usually fewer than you think.
A memoir that covers every Christmas becomes a catalog, and a catalog is where readers stop reading. Two or three, chosen for what they reveal about the larger story, give each one room to breathe. Cutting the rest is hard for a memoirist, because every one of those years was real, and I’d still cut them.
Choose the Christmases that marked transitions. The last Christmas before someone died. The first Christmas after a divorce. The Christmas when the family tradition broke or changed. The Christmas that was ordinary but now feels precious because you didn’t know it was the last time everyone would be together. Those are the ones that carry emotional weight beyond nostalgia.
Interview family members while you can. Everyone remembers the same Christmas differently. Your mother’s version of Christmas 1985 and your version are both true and both incomplete. The gaps between different people’s memories are often where the most interesting material lives. When my grandfather told me about his wartime experiences for Behind the Wire, the family’s secondhand stories didn’t match his actual account. The discrepancies revealed more about the family than the events themselves did.
Behind the Wire came out of exactly that gap between the family’s version and my grandfather’s own account.
That gap gets wider once the person is gone, and nobody’s left to say which family version is right. Ask your people about their Christmases now, while they can still answer.
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What Is the Decoration Trap in Holiday Writing?
New writers describe Christmas decorations as if they’re setting a stage. The tree stood in the corner. Lights hung from the eaves. Stockings lined the mantel. This is scene-setting, it’s the least interesting thing you can do with Christmas details, and I’d strike every line of it.
The interesting question about a decoration is why it’s there. The ornament your kid made in second grade that’s objectively ugly but occupies the most prominent spot on the tree. The lights your father insisted on hanging himself every year even after he probably shouldn’t have been on a ladder. The stocking that still has your dead brother’s name on it because nobody can bring themselves to take it down.
Every decoration in a real household has a story. In fiction, every decoration should serve the same function: it should tell the reader something about the people who live there that dialogue and action haven’t already revealed. If the decoration is just atmosphere, cut it.
How Do You Write About Hard Christmases?
The Christmases that matter most in both fiction and memoir are rarely the perfect ones. They’re the ones where something went wrong, or something was missing, or the gap between expectation and reality was wide enough to walk through.
The stocking that still has your dead brother’s name on it because nobody can bring themselves to take it down.
Don’t sanitize these: the Christmas you spent alone after losing your spouse, the one where the family fight finally happened, or the one where money was tight and everyone pretended the small gifts were fine. Those years give holiday writing its weight. Readers connect with the effort to find meaning when the circumstances aren’t cooperating, and a memoirist who scrubs the hard years out to protect the family image cheats the readers and the family both.
In memoir, the hard Christmases are often the most valuable material. They’re where you learned something about yourself, your family, or your capacity to endure. If you’re writing fiction, the hard Christmas is where your character reveals who they really are underneath the holiday performance.
| Element | Generic approach | Specific approach |
|---|---|---|
| Description | “The warm glow of the season” | The particular tree, family and tension of one Christmas |
| Sensory detail | All five senses listed like a checklist | One or two details that reveal character |
| Food | Naming the dish | The process, the kitchen and the cook’s hands |
| Family recipes | Measured cups and oven temperatures | The imprecise way the cook would explain it |
| Decorations | Scene-setting: tree, lights, stockings | Why it’s there and what it reveals about the people |
| Fiction scenes | Christmas used as wallpaper | Holiday expectations turned against the characters |
| Memoir selection | Every Christmas, a catalog | Two or three that marked transitions |
| Hard Christmases | Scrubbed to protect the family image | Kept, because they give holiday writing its weight |
My take
Skip the twinkling lights and the cookie smell. Readers have seen them a thousand times and slide right past. Write the particular tree, the particular family and the tension that made that one Christmas different. The hard years hold the story, the one spent alone or the one where the fight finally happened. A memoirist who scrubs those out cheats the readers and the family both. Cut any decoration that doesn’t reveal something.
Keeping It Evergreen
Holiday writing has a unique advantage: it’s seasonal content that readers return to every year. An article about Christmas writing craft is relevant every November and December. A memoir chapter about a meaningful Christmas gets reread when the season comes around. A fictional Christmas scene becomes the chapter readers remember when someone asks about the book during the holidays.
Write it well once and the chapter keeps working every December, for readers and for your family. Write it generically and you’ve wasted the one season when people go looking for exactly this kind of story, and a family’s real Christmas traded for tinsel is a poor swap.
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Generic Christmas sentiment is telling. Show Don’t Tell is my book on the difference, built on more than a hundred before and after examples of handing readers evidence instead of conclusions.
